Friday, October 12, 2012
Lloyd Irving Bradbury – Poetry
Hello, Lloyd:
thank you for assignment Five. Your grade is A.
The poem addressed to the dragon is good and true. There is a dragon in computers that we must overcome! I think you can improve one line that says, youngou saying a different song.
Correction: You sing a different song.
The conversation with the dead man is powerful with emotional suggestions. Was it a murder? You say: He was a good man.
Who is heree?
I have your other assignments and will grade them as soon as I can. Next week, I have to attend a meeting with the Hadley School members and many instructors will be there. Thank you for your patience.
Jerrie Lawhorn
>----- Original Message -----
>From: "Lloyd Bradbury"
>To: "Geraldine Lawhorn"
>2012 10:45:31 -0500
>Subject: elements of poetry chapter 5 unit two exercise
>Lloyd Bradbury
>7815 W. 39th St., Lyons, IL 60534
> Kelly - one - 708 - 447-2041
>attention Geraldine L.
>Elements of poetry unit two poetry strategy
>Chapter 5 is addressing A specific audience
> dear Dragon, why do you speak
>note, this is a'' type of poetry
>apostrophy poem
> I wake you up so you can hear me speak
> You I do not Fear
> to understand I must be clear
> you do not breath fire
> or does your heart desire
> do you cry and have tears
> or do you have no fears
> because you have no dears
> when I speak wrong
> you saying a different song
> some would say you are a freak
> because of your computer speak
> where do you dwell
> certainly not in a water well
> or a creature from a fiery hell
> I know you're in the computer deep
> a speech program when called to sleep
> this is a poem written on July 6, 2012,
copyrighted by
>Lloyd Irving Bradbury
>A conversation with the dead
> I am sorry you are dead.
>I do not forgive you.
> He was a good man
>you did not know me.
> We will miss him.
>I don't think so.
> He loved us all
>I hated you
> he change the world
>the world changed me.
> He had great faith in God
>I am going to hell.
> I knew him
>You are me.
> By Lloyd Irving Bradbury the magnificent
>document
thank you for assignment Five. Your grade is A.
The poem addressed to the dragon is good and true. There is a dragon in computers that we must overcome! I think you can improve one line that says, youngou saying a different song.
Correction: You sing a different song.
The conversation with the dead man is powerful with emotional suggestions. Was it a murder? You say: He was a good man.
Who is heree?
I have your other assignments and will grade them as soon as I can. Next week, I have to attend a meeting with the Hadley School members and many instructors will be there. Thank you for your patience.
Jerrie Lawhorn
>----- Original Message -----
>From: "Lloyd Bradbury"
>To: "Geraldine Lawhorn"
>2012 10:45:31 -0500
>Subject: elements of poetry chapter 5 unit two exercise
>Lloyd Bradbury
>7815 W. 39th St., Lyons, IL 60534
> Kelly - one - 708 - 447-2041
>attention Geraldine L.
>Elements of poetry unit two poetry strategy
>Chapter 5 is addressing A specific audience
> dear Dragon, why do you speak
>note, this is a'' type of poetry
>apostrophy poem
> I wake you up so you can hear me speak
> You I do not Fear
> to understand I must be clear
> you do not breath fire
> or does your heart desire
> do you cry and have tears
> or do you have no fears
> because you have no dears
> when I speak wrong
> you saying a different song
> some would say you are a freak
> because of your computer speak
> where do you dwell
> certainly not in a water well
> or a creature from a fiery hell
> I know you're in the computer deep
> a speech program when called to sleep
> this is a poem written on July 6, 2012,
copyrighted by
>Lloyd Irving Bradbury
>A conversation with the dead
> I am sorry you are dead.
>I do not forgive you.
> He was a good man
>you did not know me.
> We will miss him.
>I don't think so.
> He loved us all
>I hated you
> he change the world
>the world changed me.
> He had great faith in God
>I am going to hell.
> I knew him
>You are me.
> By Lloyd Irving Bradbury the magnificent
>document
